Wednesday, April 8, 2009

Invisible

The day my lover died, I ran away to Heaven to see that lonely light. But from here it was invisible.
The day my lover died, I ran away to Hell, to see that lonely flame. But from here it was invisible.
The day my lover died, I ran away from home, to see that lonely life, now which i live
alone.

3 comments:

  1. I really like this one, it's very, smooth. It just goes along without a weird word or a stuttering phrase. It's something that needs to be read aloud. XD HIII-YOPPPPPPPPPP!! -chops tip of pencil off, haha, now you no write no more- LOL jk jk

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